New & Final Draft of Front Page

After looking at my magazine and finding various possible changed which could be made I decided to again make another draft, I found that the masthead text needed to be made alot larger so it took up alot more of the top area of the page, I also decided to change the colour of the masthead so that it stood out more from the dark background of the page. I felt that white would be a good colour to use as it was very different from all the other colours which had been used on the page.
I also added various other cover lines so that this again took up more of the page. and made the magazine more realistic, i also felt that it would make it appeal to the audience more as it would tell the audience what was in the magazine therefore would appeal more.
I moved various element on the page also such as the banner headline because it made more room for the various things which had been added into the page.
I also neatened the editing of the image and made the edges of it alot neater.